itachi doujinshi page 10

gyaa page 10 is finally out . it's my first time I draw a beast, and it's bird well not ordinary bird, when you look at it, you'll know that is a phoenix right? or may be I didn't draw it good enough for being call it phoenix??
does it good or not?
did I make a mistake at my drawing??
please comment me I need that for this page...

cover : [link]
page 1 : [link]
page 2 : [link]
page 3 : [link]
page 4 : [link]
page 5 : [link]
page 6 : [link]
page 7 : [link]
page 8 : [link]
page 9 : [link]
page 10 : here
page 11 : [link]